Anyone wanna hear a song i made?
| Bromley |
 Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 7:38pm |
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It's just me fucking around on guitar with a couple of samples, but would be curious to know what you thought...(ignore the quality, the guitar parts were all done in one take without a metronome and had to do the percussion using the guitar... ) http://s64.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3H782HQN22NEW154XZOG0K2PAB |
| Cazerelli |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 7:47pm |
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i really like that. but i do think it would sound better with me singing |
| Oasisunit |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 8:15pm |
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should be careful about posting your own songs on here, FUK is a very very tough crowd when it comes to reviewing music... |
| SOS |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 8:32pm |
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should be careful about posting your own songs on here, FUK is a very very tough crowd when it comes to reviewing music... yeah and an easy crowd with what?! |
| Bromley |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 8:38pm |
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cheers relf... that's the reason i'd post it though, cos people will say what they think and i'm more likely to get an objective opinion...it's not taken a massive amount of effort, and i won't take it personally, but i like it and was just curious to see what others think |
| harker2002 |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 8:58pm |
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that song is ace, i watched lost in translation the other day and it put my in mind of that, or one of the songs of the soundtrack |
| datsun |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 10:43pm |
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that song is ace, i watched lost in translation the other day and it put my in mind of that, or one of the songs of the soundtrack it does sound very 'Lost In Translation-ish' i like it you got any more stuff? |
| SOS |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 10:51pm |
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Yeah great track mate, very movie soundtrack. Its weirds, at somepoints I was thinking there was too much at the peak, but i am not sure now as it sort of added to it and made you appreciate the contrasts and meledy alot more. Give us the tab ? |
| Bromley |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 10:52pm |
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Thanks... Have one other i've done on my own, which is very melodramatic with a peter o'toole sample...a bit cringe-worthy really and another proper lo-fi analogue recorded track with my mate, with a spanish sample...i really like it, but the quality's shit-poor will put up if you want? other songs are for my band, are more conventional and poppy, but should be doing recording over summer, so will ask for some more objective criticism then... |
| Bromley |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 10:54pm |
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Yeah great track mate, very movie soundtrack. Its weirds, at somepoints I was thinking there was too much at the peak, but i am not sure now as it sort of added to it and made you appreciate the contrasts and meledy alot more. Give us the tab ? ha, yeah i wanted the noise-peak, just to structure it really... and it's basically based around an A to D chord progression... figure the rest out for yourself |
| SOS |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 10:55pm |
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I am too much of a guitar noob to figure it out mate Also its repeating on media player as i cant be arsed to swap it, must be the 4th time through now and happoy to listen to it again, good sign that |
| Bromley |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 11:24pm |
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yeah, there's about 10 tracks on there, some of them just noise, but about 5 guitar bits...had to do the bass on guitar too, so sound s a bit shit...but cheers, appreciate the feedback man... here's the other two: melodramatic O'toole one: http://s59.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3CKAZ1K0YAAM61WFZDGFEYF0J5 lo-fi 'la habitacion': http://s59.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3JKJBUA1P5AD41SPDWAAFGPU6F (quality's shit, you can hear me and my mate arguing at the beginning too, but features ukelele, glockenspiel, melody horn, guitar and bass, with spanish newsreader sample...) |
| PH!L |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 11:37pm |
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Some decent stuff mate. The bass line in O'Toole souns kinda like U2 - Sometime you cant make it on your own |
| Bromley |
Posted: Fri, 07/04/2006 - 11:43pm |
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The bass line in O'Toole souns kinda like U2 - Sometime you cant make it on your own oasisunit was right, you guys are a bit OTT on the criticism... thanks though... |
| Oasisunit |
Posted: Sat, 08/04/2006 - 12:13am |
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The bass line in O'Toole souns kinda like U2 - Sometime you cant make it on your own oasisunit was right, you guys are a bit OTT on the criticism... thanks though... your comments have been nice though, when i posted my stuff the comments were mucn much worse... probalby cause this forum is full of music and clothes freaks.... i was just reading an interview with Paul Weller and he said the most important things in his life are "Music, clothes, girls, and wanking" |
| Rirawin |
Posted: Sat, 08/04/2006 - 8:08am |
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Nice one Bromley, not too sure when it goes really loud about 2:40 in and then returns to normal... as there's a bit of distortion, but I'm guessing that's down to the recording? I still like it nonetheless |
| kefff is |
Posted: Mon, 10/04/2006 - 5:55pm |
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It's just me fucking around on guitar with a couple of samples, but would be curious to know what you thought...(ignore the quality, the guitar parts were all done in one take without a metronome and had to do the percussion using the guitar... ) http://s64.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3H782HQN22NEW154XZOG0K2PAB Really really like this, even got it in my "study" playlist |
| Bromley |
Posted: Mon, 10/04/2006 - 9:32pm |
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ha, cheers man...that's the finest of compliments... |
| subtledagger |
Posted: Wed, 12/04/2006 - 1:38am |
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Not bad, pretty boring after a short while. Could do better myself. |
| Bromley |
Posted: Wed, 12/04/2006 - 1:12pm |
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yeah i agree, there's not much to it at the minute...was just exploring that melody and hook...will eventually become a proper song with verse/chorus structure, vocals, violin playing the lead guitar line and percussion, but won't be able to record that till summer... you do your own stuff too? put it up, would like to hear it, if that's cool? |
| subtledagger |
Posted: Wed, 12/04/2006 - 3:04pm |
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FFFFFFFFFFFHI "KL""!K!"K!""K!"K!!! wewwank! I wrote a reply then it made me log back in and I lost it! ARGGH!! Anyways, naaah, was I just being a fool. Nice tunes , I really couldn't do any better at all. I play guitar, but can't write a damn thing! I know absolutely no theory. I might write a nice little melody then get stuck on where to go next or what to play over it. I suppose knowing what notes can be played over what chords, or what notes make up a chord etc is pretty useful, heheh! I found a decent once, Blind Summit I think it was, gave you lots of unusal chords and chord progressions. I should really try to learn some basics but it's just so much more fun to actually play! When I'm in the mood for some slow, mellow tunes I listen to some Buckethead. A bit repetitive and probably longer than they need to be but you might like parts heheh! Hills Of Eternity Lone Sal Bug Wishing Well |
that pretty much sums me up...