I’m sorry but no. I’m not being a dick but minus the parka that’s just a really bad ‘dad at the adventure castle’ look. Some nice individual items but they don’t work together as a look.
Incorrect. That is a vis fit done well without the need for stuff like the kimonos etc but the hood with that parka, fit of jeans and boots all look as you would expect from that type of look
Clapton Visvim Vs Mayer Visvim
For what it’s worth I’d say black denim (or much lighter blue) and a size down on the jacket. Other than that looks cool to me.